Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Can you feel the pain...

I feel the wind blowing again
telling me that summer is goning

I've seen the world going apart
its my love that stood tall again

My faith is what I'm left with
dusting my soul from bottom again

Looking for the freedom which I've lost
reasoning myself that shackles will break again

Late last night, when world was sleeping
I dreamed my love calling me again

Can you feel the pain, I am going through again.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

This poem is the manifestation of emotion. It seems that the poet is going through an endless angusih. This is not clear what has caused that pain but it is not going to end soon.

Anonymous said...

Very nice poem in quiet a pithy and concise way. But strange thing about Saksher is his poetry is totally opposite to his personality.May be these are depiction of his inner hidden personality that has not been in full manifestation. The poet seems self trodden by his own inner feelings and emotions. I wish him all the sucsess ;-)

Anonymous said...

Shirazi, Is it you? Really? It seems you are seriously tormented with violent headaches these days…you need a doctor…………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ………… kidding………. :P:P

Honestly, I am amazed. Very touchy……I never expect such inspiring verses from you. This poem is not only a collection of words but the remarkable manifestation of inner feelings and a refined rhythmical composition of beautiful, imaginative and elevated thoughts. I must say Shirazi; you have great poetic spirit therefore you should continue writing more stuff like this.